How To Ask For Permission to Marry His Daughter in Cantonese

This is a request from a CantonesePod.com and ChineseBay.com visitor. The two sentences are:
1)I  love  and respect  your daughter very much.
ngo5hou2ngoi3     tung4maai4     hou2zyun1ging3 nei5ge3 neoi5
我  好爱        同埋        好尊敬        你嘅女。
2）I      humbly request your permission to  marry her.
ngo5    him1bei1gam2    cing2kau4 nei5 wan5heoi2    ngo5 tung4keoi5 git3fan1
我谦卑咁请求您允许我同佢结婚。